I think I might be a day early posting on the Wolves’ August read, The End of the Story by Lydia Davis. But tomorrow evening I have a date with Bookman to chisel up some vinyl flooring in the kitchen. How romantic, eh? If you are looking for romance, do not read The End of the Story. It is essentially about the end of a relationship so go elsewhere for passion and kisses.
I’ve read a few of Davis’s short stories and a couple of her translations and admire her work at both. But her stories are such short microcosmic pieces that I wondered if she could sustain a whole novel. I should not have worried. There was only one thing I didn’t like about the book. Davis gives lots of description about where the character is living during the story but never names a town. I grew up in southern California and from the weather to the plants mentioned I began to suspect it was somewhere along the coast between Los Angles and San Diego. This distracted me throughout the book until almost the very end when I was able to pinpoint that she was living in or near Del Mar because she mentions a roller coaster and a racetrack. Del Mar is home to a horse racing track and, on the same grounds, the San Diego County fair. But by the time the final clue dropped into place, there were only about six pages left of the book. For readers who haven’t spent a little over half their life on the west coast of California, this may not be a distraction.
The rest of the book. Liked it. Lots. While it is about the end of a relationship between the narrator and her boyfriend, Vincent, it is also about the narrator writing the novel of the end of her relationship with Vincent. And because the novel is about the writing of the novel about the end of the relationship, it is not told straight through. We start at the end and hop around through the story of the narrator and Vincent. We circle around a few events a number of times looking at them from different perspectives in time and in different emotional states of the narrator. And we realize, along with the narrator, that we don’t remember things accurately, that we often make up stories about what happened to try to make sense of things, or to make ourselves look or feel better about what happened, or to make excuses for what we said or did. So there ends up being a big question about what is the truth and does it matter, especially when it comes to telling stories?
At times the truth seems to be enough, as long as I compress it and rearrange it a little. At other times it does not seem to be enough, but I’m not willing to invent very much. Most things are kept as they were. Maybe I can’t think what to put in place of the truth. Maybe I just have a poor imagination.
Notice that she admits to rearranging things even when she tells the truth which leads me to wonder, can that really be called truth then?
Davis adds another interesting layer by making the narrator a translator and a teacher. Are we to imagine that the narrator is Davis and this is a story about a relationship she really had? I’m pretty sure the narrator is not Davis, but the reader has to consider it however briefly. But what about the metafictional bits? When the narrator mentions trying to figure out what order to write the events of the novel in, is that just the narrator or is that Davis really asking the question?
Truth also comes into play in the relationship between the narrator and Vincent as they sometimes lie. And sometimes the narrator doesn’t even tell herself the truth. So many questions come up but no answers.
The novel is written in a simple, straightforward style. There are no chapters per se, but more like bite size pieces to chew on. The reading is fairly quick and easy but that doesn’t mean the book is lightweight. It only means that the language doesn’t get in the way of the story.
And now I find that even though I would like to say a little more, my brainpower has run out and this will have to do.
No no, you’re not early – we’re all HORRIBLY LATE, so abject apologies at the fact that yet again we’re late to our own party. I am going to try hard to finish this and get a post up later this week. I got so distracted with Mary Gaitskill and disgust stuff that I’m afraid Davis got the short end of my attention stick.
But I’m so glad you liked this! I’m very much enjoying it too, despite my lateness. And I’m so glad you pinpointed the spot in California she was living; it seems like an oddly small detail and yet it was driving me a bit crazy trying to figure it out as well. (Thought it might be the Bay Area because of all the hills and the fact that the fog rolls in predictably in the afternoons, but I was obviously far north.)
I think you did an excellent job talking about the book! I actually bought it when you first mentioned it so am glad to hear more about it. I am not quite in the mood for a story like this but it sounds like it’s going to be really good for the moment when I Am in the mood! I’ve yet to read her–unless you count her Madame Bovary translation!
(Which was excellent by the way). Good luck with the floor–probably after this book ripping up vinyl with your Bookman Does sound romantic!
Chiselling vinyl flooring? :S You know there are people who can do that for you…
Little things like lack of a mentioned location can drive at least some of us crazy. I recently read something, although I can’t remember what it was, that drove me crazy in a similar way. And the other night I watched Rizzoli & Isles (not at all like the books) and almost had a stroke when the title characters drove to the Public Gardens (it’s Garden, singular, as is Boston Common) and parked near a split rail fence to spy on Rizzoli’s brother. Really? The Public Garden is in the center of Boston, surrounded on four sides by city streets and no split rail fences in sight! Having lived most of my life in or near Boston, these things make me apoplectic.
Emily, so you’ll be fashionably late
I thought early on the town was in northern California too but then it kept moving further down the coast the more she’d describe it until it finally stopped in Del Mar. Now you can finish the book without that little piece bugging you! I look forward to your thoughts on it.
Danielle, thanks! I hope you enjoy the book when the mood to read it strikes. And thanks for the floor good wishes. Everything was going smoothly until now and the way the vinyl was laid down. But what is a home improvement project without a snafu?
Sylvia, oh yes, our floor guy will be doing whatever we can’t manage but the less he does, the cheaper the final bill. Besides, we can’t let him have all the fun
Joan, it’s funny and wrong what happens to locations on film. There are several old Start Trek episodes filmed in a canyon near Los Angeles to which I have been and when I see the episodes I know exactly where they are which ruins the whole on another planet conceit entirely. The truthfulness, or lack of, in location for your Boston Garden observation fits right in with all the questions about truth that Davis’s novel brings up.
Enhanced truth.
It’s always fun to spot local settings.
This one sounds intriguing to me. I’m a native Californian and would probably be trying to guess the location too. Thank goodness you saved me the trouble as it would have distracted me whilst reading for sure!
Carrie, enhanced truth. I like it!
Kathleen, I can honestly say I’ve not read a book quite like this one before. If you ever read it, since you now know the location, I hope you can read it without being distracted like I was!
At the moment, there’s a book of Lydia Davis’s collected short stories out in paperback and I keep hovering over it, trying to decide whether or not to get it. Perhaps it would be better to start with this one? (you notice how smoothly I move from deciding ‘whether’ to get it, to deciding ‘which’ one to acquire….gosh, I amaze myself at times!
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Litlove, well it is perfectly clear to me that you need to acquire both books
Oh, this book sounds fabulous! I like novels that are self-referential in the way this one is. I already have a Davis book on my TBR shelves, but clearly I need another!
Dorothy, I suspect you would like this book very much.